Friday, June 11, 2010

chapter eleven ;

Third post tonight ...... is this real life?

Its not hard for me to say the things that you do, you bring out the best in me, when it's not the best for you. It's been a long time since I didn't know. Could we forget yesterday? Start over again. Baby I think I owe you one, every time I come around, you're ready for the letdown. Here I sit alone, it was my fault I know. If I was you I wouldn't take me back, just let me down slowly please.

My hands were shaking as I went up into my room. Swimming? SWIMMING? Wow, nice thinking Ally. GOOD ONE.

I snatched up my black strapless bikini top and zebra print bottoms, slid them on, and wrapped a towel around me. The sun was almost gone, but it was still pretty hot out. As I got closer to the lake, I saw Jon slip his shirt over his head, showing off his perfectly toned stomach. It was like a brick hit me in the throat, I had to cough in order to breathe again. Well it caught Jon's attention. Great.

"Took you long enough."

"Oh shuttup you." I joked as he got closer to me.

"So, do you plan on swimming with that towel on?"

I laughed as our eyes met. "Mr. Toews, are you trying to talk me into showing off my body?"

Just then, he wrapped his arms around my shoulders, and there was that smirk again. "Is it working?"


"Damn." He muttered.

I laughed and gently brushed my lips over his. I wasn't sure what came over me, but, he was making me laugh like a little child. He pressed his lips over mine harder as his hand ran down my side, then he tugged on my towel.

"You cheeky bastard." I gasped pushing him from me.

"Eh, it comes with the territory." He replied looking my body up at down. He drew in a sharp breath. "Wow."

"You're not so bad yourself." I casually commented glancing at his body again.

"Last one into the water buys the other dinner?"

I rolled my eyes. "Whatever you say Captain Serious."

We both ran towards the dock, my feet picked up speed as I sprung off the dock and right into the cold water. I came up from the water and Jon was sitting on the deck, smiling like a kindergardner.

"You.. OH MY GOD! YOU MEANT TO DO THAT!" I yelled.

"Ha, you figured me out well."

"Jonathan Toews, you are one sneaky fucker." I huffed climbing back up onto the dock.

"You love it, don't lie."

I pushed him away from me, then he shoved me back, harder. His hands clasped my wrists as we continued to act like a bunch of five year olds. Then he grabbed my leg, and I landed on him. His chest was rising faster and faster as I ran my hand down his chest, then his stomach. His skin was growing goosebumps, making me smirk with satisfaction. I closed his mouth with mine, his warm lips moved perfectly with my cool ones. My mind was racing, but I couldn't remember much except he whispered something in my ear and then we were in my room. The hell with it. It was summer. It was all about making mistakes and learning new things.


  1. Oh shit!!! Captain Serious is getting some booty lmao great update!! I was pretty impressed with three updates

  2. OOOH!!! hahaha wow! niiiiice! I like it, and love this story! great job! loving this!